Ghoul Poem by Bryony Sheldon

Ghoul

Rating: 5.0


You're in your summer dress
Showin' them bare, fleshy legs,
I'm a teenager in heat-
And I smile...
Just gotta get my spill-
I'm a haemophile...

Come a little bit closer.
I'll cut a little bit deeper.
You've never felt anything like this before.

Don't fret, I'll gouge you out gently,
Feel the tip; I push it in slowly,
A muffled scream at night-
What can you do...?
I seen the way you look at me, girl-
Well I been lookin' too!

I'll go harder next time!
I'll see you in the next life!
...But you can never be too sure!

Saturday, April 25, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: death,love,macabre,romance,violence
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I ate her out on the first date...

It was written about cannibalism, but I'm sure you can find other ways to interpret it.

I don't actually know what the last line is supposed to mean, it just sounds threatening.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 03 May 2020

Haunting macabre sensational. Very imaginative and poetic in wording and phrasing. Kudos. Plz do read and comment my newest poem too, titled, ' miraculous birds seen in sacred sanctuary'

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Shaun Cronick 26 April 2020

Wow! Well! When in Rome...Very dark, very diabolical, very devious..My kind of poem. There's more fun reading a good dark one compared to easily forgettable, luvvy duvvy sausage-factory poems, This is something to make every heart beat that little bit faster. Thanks Bryony for living up lockdown.10++ and added to my midnight black vault. Stay well and stay healthy. And don't let the bedbugs bite...

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