Futility Poem by John S

Maybe that pill just lies deep within our hearts. A good poem.

I like the honesty, vulnerability and transperency that this poem implores with in a powerful way. The fact that these dark words are able to be presented gives credence to the idea that hope for a more meanigful and joyous existence is not unfounded. Good writing.

A poem with confession and asking for help how to fight fear..great I wish you may find out! !

Good poem. The message is well delivered. Pls keep writing

Good thoughts, well expressed. That you can always benefit from well-meaning assessment is the mark of a good writer. The next step is to read good poetry. Read mine - Brush Strokes - Adeline

Write comment. Such a nice start, John Sander. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

A well written and poignant poem, John

A very intense poem, searching for a way to alleviate inner pain and fear, a stark reality penetrating mind and heart, looking for a quick fix known not to exist. A very compelling and honest portrayal and depiction of one of life's hardest feelings/thoughts to deal with, the futility of a hopeless existence. Great write, I give you a 10. Thank you for sharing, RoseAnn

I don't consider myself an expert on writing poetry so I don't usually comment in that regard, but I think you could tighten it up a bit.

I like the articulation and insight of the poem. The only pill here is Faith - which is acting on what one believes in. NO FAITH NO MIRACLE. Thanks for sharing.please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.