Fresh Thoughts Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Fresh Thoughts



The same kept rhetoric,
Pregnant yet again...
With expected effects,
To leave a difference than the rest...
Still has defects.

Aborted are fresh thoughts,
To catch attention sought...
Isn't coming,
For those awaiting updates...
To see that new age.

Gains,
To obtain...
Have been diminished.
And shown to be witnessed,
Any gains to obtain have all been finished.
Gains to obtain,
Have lost to gimmicks.
And tongue twisting tricks.

Fresh thoughts,
Have been aborted...
For quicky gimmicks.
To trick the minds for them to get.

Fresh thoughts,
Have been aborted...
For quicky gimmicks.
To trick the minds for them to get.

Gains,
To obtain...
Have been diminished.
And fresh thoughts have been aborted.
Gains,
To obtain...
Have been diminished.
And fresh thoughts have been aborted.
To deliver aging ideals bought.

Sunday, October 11, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: life
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