Fragrance (Haiku) Poem by Govind Ramakrishnan

Fragrance (Haiku)



in this cup of tea
i smell the jasmine flower
is it a full moon?

© 2016

Tuesday, March 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: moon,nature
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Today happens to be the full moon day.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 22 March 2016

Jasmine and full moon. thinking of your poetic mind and your imagination which made you write this poem. thank you very much dear poet. tony

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Gil Highlander 22 March 2016

masterpiece young poet, great imagination and exquisite creativity! keep up these haikus.

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Stephen Park 22 March 2016

magic haiku, it made me feel like i was sitting on the moon, looking at the earth and enjoying some jasmine tea. thank you for transporting me there.

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Leonardo Martinez 27 March 2016

Yess...I miss NOLA now!

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Guru Kothandaraman 22 March 2016

Ha ha...clever composition, this is a terrific poem! The jasmine flower smells the strongest on full moon days. You have captured the nuances so beautifully

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Narayanan Kutty Pozhath 27 April 2018

A full moon is doing wonderful job in a cup of tea. Good imagination.

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Jeanette Telusma 05 October 2017

A lovely poem.... thanks for sharing. I enjoyed reading it and reading it some more.

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Bharati Nayak 09 August 2017

in this cup of tea i smell the jasmine flower is it a full moon? - - - -Wow- - I instantly feel the fragrance that a full moon brings.A great haiku.

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Kostas Lagos 06 August 2017

I can smell the jasmine too! Great one!

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Richard Wlodarski 14 May 2017

A most wondrous haiku, Govind. My poetic response: Artistic Poet Intelligent mind Vivid imagery Artistry of poet

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