Fertile Soil Poem by Tom Billsborough

Fertile Soil

Rating: 5.0


Pale Dawn is fallow.
In silent soil the poem grows
Dreams of tomorrow.

Tuesday, May 16, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: creation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Annette Aitken 17 May 2017

So much said in so few words, makes the imagination live. Anna.

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Tom Billsborough 17 May 2017

I'm the opposite in prose, an old windbag!

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Unwritten Soul 17 May 2017

Dream is the seed of future, isnt? :) lovely work..loved it

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Tom Billsborough 17 May 2017

It is indeed. The inspiration, like you!

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Valsa George 16 May 2017

So true... It is only in silence that a poem grows, blooms and bears fruit! In stillness the mind becomes fecund and imagination takes on wings and flies! Beautifully summed up the most congenial environs for the birth of a poem! Top marks!

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Tom Billsborough 17 May 2017

Yes, in those silent moments you can find clarity. I'm a Dawn riser and when in the Tirol many years ago I'd go out early and everything was so still. The only sound I heard was the tinkling of cow bells coming from the misty pastures.

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Susan Williams 16 May 2017

Tom this is so right on! In silent soil the poem grows- - - - - - - -sending its roots deep and its stem straight and tall into the light This is an extraordinary piece of work- -succinct yet very evocative of the creativity of writing and the season and the heart and soul. Very much on my fav list.

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Tom Billsborough 16 May 2017

I am in Senryu training, Susan. Wes is lining up a challenge soon. He's doing the limericks, of course! I made one of your poems a favourite today. So I declare it a draw! I think you and Pam and Valsa are my three musketeers!

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