Family History Part 06: Angel At The River Poem by Cowboy Ron Williams

Family History Part 06: Angel At The River

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I've seen some things throughout the years;
I know we're not alone.
There's angels watching over us;
to me this has been shown.

When I was just a little boy
I fell into a stream,
and I was swept downstream a ways;
I tried, but couldn't scream.

My mouth and nose were underneath
the water, cold and wet,
but not a drop came to my lungs;
I owed someone a debt.

I felt some strong hands pull me out;
a handsome man stood there,
all dressed in clothes from long ago,
with flowing, long black hair.

He wrapped me in his overcoat
and held me to his chest.
I was exhausted from my plight,
and he told me to rest.

I fell asleep and dreamed of home
and life back on the farm,
where only good things waited there,
and nothing to cause harm.

I woke up in my father's arms;
the man and coat were gone.
I tried to tell my dad the tale,
but I could only yawn.

I guess about ten years went by,
when in a family book
I happened on a certain page;
one glance was all it took!

There was my great-great grandfather;
I'd not see him before;
He had that long, black flowing hair,
and that same coat he wore!

Family History Part 06: Angel At The River
Monday, September 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: family,history
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
That our loved ones are so close, it is certain.They're just on the other side of a curtain.In my mind, I often compare this experience to that of my great-grandfather, who WILLINGLY jumped into a swollen river, as explained in Family History part 05.If Poem Hunter ever restores the Next Poem and Previous poem buttons, you will be able to find that easily just by clicking Previous Poem.I certainly did not jump into the stream willingly. I was playing in the mud on the edge and slipped and fell into the moving current. I really should have drowned that day.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Denis Mair 28 September 2020

Uncanny! Your great-grandfather survived a plunge into a river with hands tied. How fitting that his soul helped you to escape drowning. This reminds me of when my daughter fell into a pool, at age two, and sank to the bottom. As I dove down to save her, I saw her mouth wide open. After I brought her to the surface, she was fine. A reflex had sealed her windpipe, so she didn't choke or splutter.

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Smoky Hoss 28 September 2020

Absolutely incredible Cowboy. I love this. Every now n then, here n there, the lights of eternity shine into the world we presently know.... the curtain gets pulled back just a bit, for just a glimpse...

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 February 2021

My first comment should be in the earlier poem: Family History Part 5. It was inadvertently put in here, so sorry.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 February 2021

Thank you, Ron, for giving us the privilege of taking a glimpse of your family. Top Marks! ! !

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 February 2021

A marvelous family story nicely versified.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 February 2021

Sometimes when we are at the brink of death or when our life is so threatened, it is where at our best

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Varsha M 02 February 2021

Your poem reminder me of unseen hands story. Such experience fo happen especially ehen we need it most as a miracle indeed. Your poem is touchy.

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