Could You Love Me? Poem by Cowboy Ron Williams

Could You Love Me?

Rating: 4.7


I asked the moon
if you could ever love me.
She did not respond
but just turned kind of green
and gave me a cheesy look.

I asked the stars
if our love was in the cards
and their only reply
was a twinkle in their eyes.

I asked the wind
if your love I'd ever win
and what she had to say
just blew me away.

My quest had just begun
when I turned to the sun,
but it became so hot
that my question I forgot.

What was I talking about?

Oh, yes! It seems that I love you.
Could you possibly love me, too?

Could You Love Me?
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 July 2021

I love ya Cowboy. You always put a smile on my face!

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Susan Williams 14 November 2023

oh my word! you just put a smile on my grumpy face

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Cowboy Ron Williams 14 November 2023

Susan, thank you for revisiting this poem and commenting again.

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Kingsley Egbukole 16 September 2023

Beautiful lovely lines of poetry. We keep seeking until we find that which we need.

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Cowboy Ron Williams 21 September 2023

Kingsley, thank you so much for the comment.

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Bri Edwards 15 September 2023

I may have lost a comment or two I just 'sent'? ? ? line 2: I think 'she', not 'you'. You end of st.1 was humorous. : )

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Koffi Sossou 16 July 2023

This is a nice poem. Life sometimes doesn't give you what you long for... and it is sad in love.

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Do you mean that is sad to be in love? I have to disagree. It is WONDERFUL to be in love. Thanks for commenting.

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Susan Williams 21 January 2023

now that is a love poem that would put a smile in the heart of any worthy gal! ! ! ! I so enjoy your poetry, my friend, they have humor, heart, and bedrock wisdom

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Susan, thank you so much. I had not seen your comment sooner, but glad I saw it now.

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