Fallen Angel Poem by alyssa carrigan

Fallen Angel



laying fallen, alone hungry for love,
abandoned lost, the life i lived gave in under my feet
the feeling of fear sourounds me
darknes falls
wings tattered
looking up on the stars for guidance
everything i knew is wrong
broken by one person
myself hungry for more yet no more to give
thrown away tossed like a rag doll
walking forward
in the darkness
tripping stumbling on my own
i see the dawn on the horizon moving forward trying to reach the light drwan to it like a moth
your waiting standing waiting for me looking on me with ever loving never changing eyes i try to reach you
then the 'angels' come lifts you up takes you away

im the fallen angel
waiting for you to wipe my blood stained tears
wiating for you to call me on
waiting for you to be there like you promised me
you promised me forever
but now im an outcast
shun by the ones who i thought were sopposed to protect me
what happend to forever. you left im searching for you calling you crying for you
now you fly on with those 'angels'
alone i wait for you to see me again searching
abondoned, cold, lost,
the fallen angel ill find my wings: with out you:

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Craig Moon 25 January 2012

Wow, your poems are so sad, But I know what its like to be hurt like that, so I right positive things in hopes of maybe someday finding and Angel. So here's one I wrote a while back which I hope you might like, , , , , Essence of our being is our souls, A light that can shines outwards from within. But unfortunately many people of this world have ignored there very own existence by letting there souls fall asleep within there own bodies. for they have been hurt, neglected, lied to, and alone for to long. But do not worry, for you can let your soul shine again, as you seek out across the vast of oceans of life other souls who wish to join there lights together so they will shine so brightly they can be seen all the way into heaven!

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Anhelica Velasquez 13 January 2012

trumendess! its amazing. it practically jumps of the page! ! ! (so to speak) i love it! nice.

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Rajendran Muthiah 13 January 2012

A heart touching love letter this is! The sweetest song tells of saddest thought.There is a rain pouring of emotions. Hats off!

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Redneck 3 13 January 2012

i like this one alot joe dirt this one is amazing i love you!

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