Eve's Apple Poem by Barry Middleton

Eve's Apple



the apple was sweet
but filled with regret

a kiss to remember
and pain to forget

moments of pleasure
incur a great debt

we all take a chance
we all place a bet

and sometimes we win
but then pirouette

the next time to lose
and take what we get

Eve's Apple
Monday, April 3, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: eden,life,temptation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dimitrios Galanis 06 April 2017

Beautiful poetical brush-notes of painting.

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Barry Middleton 06 April 2017

Thanks Dimitrios, glad you likes it. Wining and losing are always good themes I think.

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B.m. Biswas 03 April 2017

A metaphor to remind us we all commit mistakes sometimes preyed by our greed or simply by our instinct to know the unknown

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Barry Middleton 03 April 2017

Absolutely. Virtue is simply trying to do better, it is not required or possible to be perfect. Thanks for reading and commenting.

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