Eternal Love Poem by Ruerd Visser

Eternal Love

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The beauty of a rose
only lasts a while.
However beauty itself
lives on in remembrance
of the queen of flowers.
Whom surrounded by
the fragrant of a love
that always was and
always will be,
lives on in the heart
of all that lives.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 31 December 2008

Eternal love is when your partner dies, you die too.thats the purest eternal love.Nice writes as usual Ruerd.

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Rachel Butler 20 July 2015

What the heart see's even when the the fresh bud becomes a rose and then the petal withers.

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Marieta Maglas 28 August 2009

wonderful complex (visual cognitive metaphor) : ''However beauty itself lives on in remembrance of the queen of flowers'' wonderful poem.......10

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Obinna Eruchie 15 August 2009

Beautifully written. Beauty may fade physically, but it lives on spiritually in the heart to last.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi 22 January 2009

Simple and reflective! ! ! Love is living in our hearts, I believe in it, Sir. Keep writing! ! !

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Linda Moore 19 January 2009

Very Beautiful......10

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