Elegy: A Dead Public Pond Poem by Dr Dillip K Swain

Elegy: A Dead Public Pond

Rating: 4.3


By the unremitting blaze of sun,
her tank was shrunk, bed dried up.
No water, no moss left except some
patchy cracks of mud here and there.
The heavy rain surged into her pool,
came too late but made her cool.
Alas! They were wittingly dwindled
and some sailed through the air
in invisible vapors in joyous choir!

She's lamenting for she will miss
the footfalls of thousand known feet
of women, men and school children
to dive into the pool semi-necked,
to explore refreshed vigor in them
in unique pleasure, undefined ecstasy
she will no more be revived for farmers
to drain water to their emerald fields!

Lotus will no more bloom forever
by the crystal surface of her water
In deep pain, her tearful eyes peep
The huge loads of sands in some trucks
The upbeat contractor is cheering labors
To end the task to fill it up by the dusk
Ah, none left to see her spirit cry in air
No one bothers to listen to her and share!

Government contractor on high back chair
growing fatter through a dazzling tower
on the shrine of committal as her tomb.
Her spirit is sweeping her blooded tears
and cajoling her to stop lamenting there.
The seeds of her tears will now bloom
seasonal flowers of varied colors
as offering to commercial quarters!

Copyright@ Poet,4 February,2019

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rob Lamberton 01 January 2023

"The heavy rain surged into her pool"…and now down the drain so playfooly!

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M.J. Lemon 04 July 2023

Absolutely brilliant, Dillip!

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 03 May 2023

This is a beautiful, heartfelt personification poem, a tale of nature and change.

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Anjandev Roy 19 February 2023

This is an absolute gem.......thank u, sir....

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Susan Williams 29 January 2023

thank you very much for writing this and sharing it--you have certainly touched the minds of poets here on PH

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Susan Williams 29 January 2023

5 stars---what a reverse, seeing life from the pond's view! ! ! I think we should all try writing a poem from a piece of nature's point of view---maybe we will be kinder to the planet then

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