Donning The Banned Hat Poem by muthu veerappan

Donning The Banned Hat

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at the back of conventional teenage,
came in, the breakthrough..

why not try my hand at the sixth finger?
the knight marched, for the act of valour...

the thickest of coins was tossed, along with another,
coinciding in figures, with the number of cigars..

it was wills preffered, for the will of two...
wondering which end to light..
glanced the counterpart to the right..
got the key to the new world..

lips kissed it, to take on a puff..
to smoke out was really tough..

at the end, i became a maestro..
turned all into ash like fidel castro....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anupama Raghavendran 05 October 2009

beautiful way of expressing those few moments spent with the 'sixth finger'....awesome! ! ! !

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Ency Bearis 14 August 2009

remarkable poem...very nice..

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Chitra - 13 August 2009

the last stanza...sums it up..! well done

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Catrina Heart 10 August 2009

lovely and wonderful written piece! ! ! Thanks........

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Kafil Uddin Raihan 08 August 2009

Nice flow........excellent...

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