Domestic Shades-23 Poem by Indira Renganathan

Domestic Shades-23

Rating: 5.0


In The Crowd

Once on a day of Aadi- discount sale
My daughters took me out for a purchase
Whereat I was moved and moved and lost
Amid the lunacy of the mob thronging over..
Like a lost child lost
Tearfully eyeing for my daughters..

Bonanza booed threatening to find my refuge
Outside the shop whence finally
Picked me up my peevish daughters
Pointing at me that I was mindless
Like my forsaken maid
They proposed thence ever to exclude petite little me

Saturday, May 24, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nikunj Sharma 26 October 2009

liked, like a lost child lost............. well your daughters might have had a discount at your cost..........ha ha ha. nice little poem, Enjoyed it...pls read my latest poem - HUNGER'S HOLD....You may like it

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Kesav Easwaran 29 April 2009

lost in the shopping crowd...without shopping! gives interesting read...10

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a grown up child lost and found

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