Dionysus's Shame Poem by Leon Moon

Dionysus's Shame

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There could never have been anyone else
Fitted more perfectly for the job -

He would frame the homeless, the clogged traffic
and bustling silence in gold-rose droplets,
encompassing the Mauna-vowed sky
Whilst committing suicide in minuscule chaparrals
beside a bottomless reservoir, without rushing,
where no one else could see him, his loyalty remained.

There could never have been anyone else
Fitted more perfectly for the job -

He represented the caught, dragged on stage by scales
ignorant of the laws they impose -
the nobility of a true composer
He never took ownership of his creations,
even of the dragged on masterpieces
cutting his weight, despite how often dragons made him late.

There could never have been anyone else
Fitted more perfectly for the job -

Instead of sleeping, he plunged backwards
into the arrow-soot mattress,
no one could forgive him, though he never lied.
Affirmed by the humming vines rippling from the steeple,
he writes as he did when the force field hid the moon's mockery,
where no on else can see him, he forever remains...

And as he awakes, his shame disperses
Like a morning concealing the space between eye and sun.

Thursday, September 26, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty,death,depression,love,moon,morning,shame,sun,time
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This isn't about hurting anyone, or through the irony of subjectivity saving oneself after causing someone pain, either through ritual or desire, but it is about returning and arriving to the back drop of being, to the source of essential poetic visions which carried my teen years, it is the guilt of not writing them down despite the words being imprinted in my skull, despite me getting so close at to writing the title - the guilt is present for I am the same person, the act of writing evolves my soul, and it is my destiny to write them down. The journey is the same, it is just going to take longer, or seem to, and it is perfectly fine me writing them down as who I was then now, because I am still there, and they're still here, in the exact form - I have slept too much, my necessary rival-hallucinations are getting the best of me, they're stealing from me, but this is where I'm meant to be, and the first phase in the cycle of my development is nearly over, then I can finally age and bask in the effortless flow surrounding the presence of my soul.

p.s I should really take the time to draft...
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sankhajit Bhattacharjee 26 September 2019

A deep analysis and sensational thinking. Good poem.

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