Desperate Poem by Shah Surja

Desperate

Rating: 5.0


Beautiful girl in the rain bouncing on water
Oh bouncing frogs came up from the hole
Bouncing feelings in my heart
Drop-wearing - lots of rain from the sky
I'm going to drop out feelings - Desperate

Tuesday, November 24, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dorina Neculce 08 February 2016

very interesting ideea I'm going to drop out feelings

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Driss Ezzireg 05 December 2015

Beautiful poem..I liked the transition from description of external feats of nature to internal feelings.Thanks for sharing it.

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Farzana Shumi 29 November 2015

Brilliantly presented poem...

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Shah Surja 30 November 2015

Thanks

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Kumarmani Mahakul 24 November 2015

Rain gives enormous beauty to the nature. Wonderful poem shared on nature definitely. Interesting...10

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Shah Surja 24 November 2015

Thank you dear poet

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