Dead... Poem by Edgar Alvarez

Dead...

Rating: 3.0


Every time i hear your voice
Make me forget about every other noise

Every lonely day and every silent night
I wish you could be here so i could hold you tight

i want to feel that rush
when our bodies meet and i feel your touch

When we first met what did i feel and say
Nothing...i first had to trust and give way

Once we got to know each other
I put my mind on you and not another

I use to want to test your love
but the true love comes from above

Your beauty is like no other
You heard me right i didn't studier

She don't matter only you
And i know what i say is true

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 09 September 2008

This is not written or organized very well. The structure may need some work as well.I cannot recommend it. GW62

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