Dance Of Nature Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Dance Of Nature

Rating: 5.0


Stood like a high and firm mountain
and obstructed the external aggressors
covered the face with the white snow
listened to the lectures of the old professors.

Thundering, lightning, preaching the ethics
But a sucker in me when sucked the clouds
Cold statics was changed in a hot dynamics
Buried alive the ethics, no grave no shrouds.

Hard snow when melted with smiles of the sun
The rivers started dancing on its very first call
The red hot earth turned soft and green,
Colors and aroma scattered over all.

Closed the book of ethics on the very first showers
Joined the rivers and the colorful flowers!

Dance Of Nature
Saturday, April 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Murray Smith 21 April 2018

I love the penultimate stanza of the poem. It shows how nature dances.

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Rini Shibu 21 April 2018

The very first shower which joined rivers and colorful flowers.beautiful expression

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 23 April 2018

A vivid portrayal of the wonders and beauty of nature. Your beautiful verses make nature more magnificent. Marvelous poem.Enjoyed reading it.10

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Kostas Lagos 23 April 2018

This poem is just magnificent!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 April 2018

Dear Akhtar, such a splendid poem.....10++++

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 April 2018

Hard snow melts and smiles while with due love and respect sun touches snow. Colors and aroma scattered over all and green scene motivate mind. An amazing sharing is done...10

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Kelly Kurt 21 April 2018

A masterpiece! English is, I presume, your second language. It has been your ally, along with your sheer creativity. Much enjoyed.

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