Countryside Life2 Poem by Lily YANG

Countryside Life2

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The slight breeze is rising,
Scent of flowers is wafting,
The sun after rain is shining,
The happy birds are singing,
Walking out of a deep cottage,
Feel good warm in the village.

Sunday, March 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: imagery,life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 29 March 2016

your imagery is three dimension reading it took all my attention I can smell the flowers and feel the heat and the birds singing oh so sweet thanks for sharing Lily

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Lily Yang 30 March 2016

thanks. it seems that you know who can draw these pictures

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