Cool And Wise Poem by Indira Renganathan

Cool And Wise

Rating: 5.0


Sea always says no to her
As he's too salty

But moon's too cool
Simply falls into the sea
Lo! just to get pickled
In the dark brine..

Yet indeed a tasty pickle

And how wise the sun is!
Clutching the brimming edge
Up the aqua upping marking
A red road of caution with
'Beware! Life Ahead
Careful Walk Across Please! ! '

Adventurous indeed! !

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Evelyn Judy Buehler 19 February 2021

They make quite a pair. A gorgeous poem!

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M Asim Nehal 08 February 2021

A free flow poem with wonderful message to march forward, great metaphor used.5***

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Varsha M 07 February 2021

Ma'am its just fantabulous drenteched in expression depth and essence. I have no words to your spell bound composition. Into my favourite.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 February 2021

A magnificent poem dear madam! Appreciated! !

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