Coming Together Poem by Susan Williams

God always teaches about togetherness which allows us to tie life in integrity and unity. An amazing brilliant poem is well penned...10

Oh, Thank you, Anjandev. I am glad you are finding my poems wonderful to read- -music to my ears! ! !

Sublime piece.......wonderful to read.....thank u......anjandev roy.

Mj! ! ! ! Thank you for pointing that out! I get so caught up with thinking and writing that I often fail to try reading it when it's done like a stranger! ! I was writing from the viewpoint you mentioned and never considered that there was another way to read it! Thank you for waking me up! ! ! I am so pleased you liked it cuz I have to admit I was a little tickled with how it turned out! ! !

Brilliant, Susan! There is a difference in meaning- -depending on whether or not I read the first line blending directly into the second. To my favourites...and a perfect 10!

Thanks for the poets notes, something else learned, gee this thing jumps around cheers kb