Chances Poem by Nyl Revol

Chances

Rating: 3.0


I've given you so many chances,
And you've only let me down.
I've tried to show a smile,
But it's replaced with a frown.

I've tried to let it all go,
And for that I'm proud.
But the sign you've been sending,
Has been really loud.

You don't say you love me,
Like you did before.
I don't feel your heart.
I don't feel anything anymore.

It looks like you've moved on,
You hardly seem to care,
About what I do,
It's like you're hardly there.

I don't want to hurt,
And I don't want to lie,
Right now it seems best to go,
Goodbye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ever Love 25 July 2012

I loved reading this poem! Good Job!

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Aubriana Munoz 05 November 2009

that was a good poem keep the good work

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Donielle Smith 04 November 2009

I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem. Excellent write! ! I been there, so I can very much relate, sometimes its best to just move on. Keep up the good work! ! luv it! ! D. Smith...........

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