Caught Poem by M.J. Lemon

Caught

Rating: 3.5


In the spider's web
I caught the humongous fly
staring at my eye

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 25 June 2021

This works both for real scene depiction and metaphor. Kudos for this senryu. Also plz do read and comment my newest poem too.

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Richard Wlodarski 24 June 2021

Hitchcock would be proud!

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Varsha M 09 June 2021

So you managed to amush your secret spy in your web.

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me poet yeps poet 09 June 2021

thank your lucky stars someonne is staring lol

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 06 June 2021

Yes with the heat we are getting I believe it Bravo!

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MjLemon 09 June 2021

Thanks, LeeAnn. Yes the heat....and gettting hotter....

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