In the spider's web I caught the humongous fly staring at my eye
This works both for real scene depiction and metaphor. Kudos for this senryu. Also plz do read and comment my newest poem too.
Hitchcock would be proud!
So you managed to amush your secret spy in your web.
thank your lucky stars someonne is staring lol
Yes with the heat we are getting I believe it Bravo!
Thanks, LeeAnn. Yes the heat....and gettting hotter....
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This works both for real scene depiction and metaphor. Kudos for this senryu. Also plz do read and comment my newest poem too.