Bleeding Poem by Matt Mooney

Bleeding

Rating: 5.0


Sliabh Aughty, my own mountain mine,
Rhododendroned ridge ever there for me;
Fields ascending higher as I go
From Ballylee to Loughrea's lake:
To look beyond at County Clare
Or to gaze at Galway Bay.

Beyond the vision of the valley
Is a village hard to find,
But now it's known the world over
Since the bog has moved in Derrybrien.

Forests, farms, furze and heather-
Colour palette in the sun:
Who'll protect them from the landslide
Slipping down the river run?

Noble men of Tobar Pheadair,
Castleboy and old Kilchreest
Wont you worry for your brothers
Who are threatened by the beast
Now let loose on this landscape
Far beyond the mountain top?
Have you seen Abhainn dá Loilioch?
Floating Christmas trees and peat
Slowly slithering towards Lough Cutra,
Killing brown trout in the squeeze,
Ruining roadways and the bridge.

Up in the pub that's warm and snug
There's talk and tension in the air:
They're telling tales of a fearsome gorge-
Up a thousand feet from there.

All the experts are left thinking
For they've failed to fight the flow:
All their barriers were upended
With a muffled mountain roar.

In Derrybrien they're not fearing
What's gone down but what's to come -
Maybe further bigger landslides!
For God's sake what's to be done?

Bring them help,
We fought for freedom-
'Tis their land, their place, their lives!
It's not just a piece of mountain -
Don't be fooled, it's far more grand;
Those who are up there isolated
Are the very salt of our native land.

When Pádraig Pearse was writing poetry
'Twas not of Golden Vales he wrote
But of the little towns of Connacht,
Of mountain fields that men have sown.

At the weekend Fleadh of Cooley-Collins
I watched a lively woman dance
In sean nós style and quiet abandon
On an afternoon in Peterswell;
While at the bar there played a fiddler,
With hat of tweed and stoic face,
His bowing was so soft and gentle
In deep respect to this great place.

Just one word about the mountain
That I grew beside secure,
Thinking mountains were forever-
They were there aloft alone:
But having been to Costa Blanca,
In a town called Guardamar,
There I saw the bulls tormented
In the ring to loud acclaim;
Such noble, haughty, well built creatures
Sent to death by lance and spear;
There they lost their way so blindly
And the blood flowed down their shanks;
Now it's nature's turn to suffer
As the bog slides o'er its floor -
Like the toros proud it's blameless;
All the shame is ours alone.

Let Spanish bulls on prados prance,
Far away from the mob's olés,
To be there to see in all their beauty
Like the backdrop of these hills.

'Twas not a bull but the Celtic tiger
Changed your serene mountain stance:
All you'll see are giant wind turbines
Every time you upwards glance.

Throw up your head and horns on high,
You wild and fearsome toro,
While the river of mud, the mountain's blood,
Flows from the land of Lough Atorick.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
In the year 2003 the construction of a wind farm up in the mountains in South Galway caused an environmental disaster.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Louis Rams 20 August 2009

THIS POEM CARRIES ME ON YOUR JOURNEY, AND THROUGH YOUR EYES I SEE, ALL THE BEAUTIES THAT WAS FOGOTTEN UNTIL YOU SET IT FREE. WONDERFULLY TOLD! A DOUBLE TEN AGAIN

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Pranab K Chakraborty 31 May 2010

Throw up your head and horns on high, You wild and fearsome toro, While the river of mud, the mountain's blood, Flows from the land of Lough Atorick Well-written poem with excellent detailing of nature and man-society. Natural calamity, worries and again dependence to the nature. A wide landscape but balanced in every tone. Regards, 10+ pranab

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Kevin Carney 24 December 2010

Beautifully written, the words so vivid you paint a picture scene after scene. Its a great poem 10+

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Kevin Carney 24 December 2010

Beautifully written, the words so vivid you paint a picture scene after scene. Its a great poem 10+

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Aditya Mudbhary 21 November 2010

Great words.. great thoughts.. great vision... Nice work there...

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Bert Bell 28 October 2010

This poem is so raw and poignant that I wept as I read it. What a statement, what gut-wrenching observations of massive destruction of nature and of God’s marvelous creatures. I am still deeply moved by this piece, sir, and I salute you for sharing it.10++++

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Anita Trivedi 04 June 2010

Very beautifully written.............. its great to read

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