Bitter Bitter Cold, Not Too Bitter To Be Playful Poem by Ravi Kopra

Bitter Bitter Cold, Not Too Bitter To Be Playful

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Bitter bitter cold
I stand like a wax mould
In my arms you fold
I hug you in a tight hold
You warm me up
take away my cold
I give you deep kisses on your mouth
that no body ever heard of in north or south
I give you kisses on your breasts
that nobody could imagine in east or west
you take away all cold
when in my arms you fold
and I love you in my hold.
Our love story for ages
again and again will be told
to the shy lovers
who never feel bold.

Thursday, January 4, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love,winter
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A Rajnish Manga inspired poem.

His original poem begins like this -

We are dying in cold
Brother, we are dying in cold...


मर गए भैया सर्दी में (Hindi)- Poem by Rajnish Manga

अच्छी खासी शीत लहर है, मर गए भैया सर्दी में.
बुरा हाल हो गया हमारा.......मौसम की बेदर्दी में.
पसरा कोहरे का आलम है,
ऊंघ रहा पूरा पालम है;
धूप कहीं पर दुबक गई है,
हवा बनी बरछी बल्लम हैं.
सुबह शाम व रात नज़र, आते हैं धुंधली वर्दी में.
अच्छी खासी शीत लहर है, मर गए भैया सर्दी में.
घर के बाहर जायें कैसे,
सौदा सुलफ़ा लायें कैसे;
कट बिजली का लागू है,
हीटर भी सुलगायें कैसे.
हमदर्द मेरे भी ठिठुर रहे हैं, आज मेरी हमदर्दी में.
अच्छी खासी शीत लहर है मर गए भैया सर्दी में.

-Rajnish Manga
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 04 January 2018

A passionate lover is never bothered about the extreme cold weather conditions. Thanks for sharing a brilliant poem.

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Ravi Kopra 04 January 2018

You deserve a lot of credit for inspiring me to put together a string of playful words. Without your 'bitter cold' poem, my poem would have never seen the light of the day. Cheers.

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