Arena Of The Soul Poem by Chan Mongol

Arena Of The Soul

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ARENA OF THE SOUL
Poem by Chan Mongol
Jul 20 of 2021


Each human soul has its own arena;
With good or, bad beast like hyena.

Ancient Astrologers found wild animals;
Beasts in brains, hearts and in nails.

Snakes, hyenas, lions, bulls, fishes;
Very few are milder like, trees and roses.

Do you know what dominating beast is in your character?
Important to find modest or milder, pernicious or terror!

You can change wilderness with good association;
Destruction can be well built with reconstruction.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 21 July 2021

You can change wilderness with good association; Destruction can be well built with reconstruction. Gorgeously worded, and so true. I have enjoyed very much this scintillating poem. Thank you for sharing.5 Stars full on Top!

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Luis A. Estable 21 July 2021

You write 'or, ' I think I should be 'or' or ', or' You put it before not after. It is a conjunction and it comes before not after as in the case of and or nor. Some lines in this are a bit on the no so clear side.

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