A Night Spent Unalone Poem by Ben Partenay

A Night Spent Unalone

Rating: 4.9


leave me to my silence
and I will leave you to your laugh
leave me to my darkness
and I will leave you to your past
or let the silence take you
and let me share your smile
while the darkness is around us
if only for awhile.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Leria Hawkins 28 September 2006

Very nice poem. Short and sweet. I really enjoyed it.

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Sarah Capella Smith 02 October 2006

Awww this is a lovely poem ~ it seems you to can capture alot in just a few sentences too! =) I love the mention of 'silence' and 'darkness' ~ are you a fan of Sylvia Plath? ~x~Sarah~x~

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Steffi Webster 11 October 2006

A very touching poem Ben I really liked this one. Short and concise it still managed to convey a great emotion in it. Keep it up!

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JoAnn Mahoney 21 November 2009

Hi Ben. I thought your poem was great. Good work. JoAnn

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Evaughn Gray 08 June 2007

wow that shares wat i feel inside that noone cares not even a little....great masterpices....

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Karen Clements 05 January 2007

A poem evoking a wonderful moment in time well done Ben Karen

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Raymond Wright 27 October 2006

Great poem, Ben. So few words, so much said. ~Ray.

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Melvina Germain 14 October 2006

I've always believed 'good things come in small packages' and that holds true here. An excellent write.--Thankyou--Melvina--

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