A Larger Space Poem by Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

A Larger Space

Rating: 3.5


A channa orientalis
kept to offer to a deity
in my room
intermittantly the whole night
jumped in the pot
half filled with water
mouth covered with a bowl.

In the morning next day
I released the fish
in a water tank
in our courtyard
and watched it swimming
with a greater freedom..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 09 August 2020

Freedom much needed! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 02 August 2020

Freedom is birthright but our greed rules the roost. Good to know that better sense prevailed.10 ++

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 July 2020

every life on this earth are free by born but to survive everyone has to be chained every life are free by born but some are born to make alive others!

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 July 2020

Muse of the day! ! Enjoying the status of nature; In your courtyard. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Akhtar Jawad 27 July 2020

The poem shows heart of a kind poet who loves freedom and natural life. A beautiful poem.

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