A gentle breeze like a loving memory
Blowing across County Meath's fertile and lush fields,
In honour of your beautiful appeal,
A gentle breeze blowing across the wide, tree lined road of Gracefield,
In honour of your happy childhood
beautifully sealed,
Your mesmerizing brown eyes and lustrous
hair,
We could see a great future for a kind and
beautiful girl that cares,
You achieve so much with ease,
Leisure is your pleasure,
Like music a song to your heart so pure,
Your lovely daughter Caylin together are
like a beautiful rapture,
Love is like a gentle breeze connecting
two hearts,
Your grandparents watching over you
smiling at your happiness their favourite
part,
Your song is sung in Counties Meath,
Leitrim, Carlow and Dublin,
When you all travel to many places on this
planet,
Rebecca and Eric you sing together now in
perfect harmony like an eternal flame is
lit,
A gentle breeze blowing across this
ancient land,
In recognition of a beautiful couple in
love,
With forever clear blue skies above.
A gentle breeze Is a fresh love song that sings - tree lined road of Gracefiel (is it Gracefield? PH sometimes misbehaves)
Thank you for your lovely comment, I made a mistake but I fixed it, it is Gracefield!
...A gentle breeze blowing across this ancient land, In recognition of a beautiful couple in love, With forever clear blue skies above. I heard background music when I read this:
Leisure is your pleasure, Like music a song to your heart so pure, Your lovely daughter Caylin together are like a beautiful rapture, Love is like a gentle breeze connecting two hearts, ...... touching expression. I love these lines. It is a beautiful poem so nicely executed. Thanks for sharing.
'Love is like a gentle breeze connecting two hearts' - indeed! So lovely thoughts expressed in easily understandable words! I loved the last stanza, particularly: 'A gentle breeze blowing across this ancient land, In recognition of a beautiful couple in love, With forever clear blue skies above.'
Your opening lines set up your reader perfectly- -]A gentle breeze like a loving memory Blowing across County Meath's fertile and lush fields, [- - with those words I am walking in your beautiful and mysterious country and feeling the truths of life therein. Beautiful.
This poem reads in such a graceful and joyous rhythm! It accompanies perfectly with its theme, and the nature, the places, the feeling, the gentle breeze. A lovely poem!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A gentle breeze like a loving memory, great imagery, dear poetess, Hazel Durham, love it, thanks for sharing the poem with us, +++++++++++++++++++ 10
Thank you for your lovely comment Muzahidul!