A Foe Dwelling In Us... Poem by Devanshu Patel

A Foe Dwelling In Us...

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It is ego that is sharper than knife.
Beware of it or it can shatter life.
It's a foe dwelling in us.
Stay away from making fuss.
Husband or wife, love more to lessen strife...!


© Devanshu patel
07/31/2019

A Foe Dwelling In Us...
Wednesday, July 31, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: ego ,happiness,love and life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Inspired by...Limerick- On The Point Of A Knife - Poem by Valsa George
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 17 January 2020

Ego, a four-fold lethal whip, Destroying Relationship, Well-writ dear Devanshu

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 August 2019

u sir r such a wonderful poet it will be a privilege if you stroll along my pages

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 02 August 2019

An amazing limerick imbued with wisdom and insight. Yes, ego has the face of an evil that can kill a beautiful life. Great rhyme throughout this well penned poem.

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Valsa George 02 August 2019

I am glad my limerick has inspired you to write another splendid limerick! You are absolutely right Devanshu! False ego can create more problems in family life than many other issues! There won't be an attitude of forgiveness if both the husband and wife think.... 'I am better '! If ego can be forsaken, life will be smoother!

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Aniruddha Pathak 31 July 2019

I liked your limerick, and the accompanying poster, Devanshu.

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Devanshu Patel

Devanshu Patel

Kapadwanj, Gujarat (India)
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