A Celestial Promise Poem by Tranquil Dawn

A Celestial Promise

Rating: 5.0


The rainbow fades
Is it the tears or the smile?
The dissipating rain
or the dying light?

Horizons of hope
color lives with bated breath.
Where the vow of another sun
awaits beyond the intriguing pitch.

Clinging to fingertips
like dew drops and sighs
the sparkle alights and reveals
a banquet for hungry teeth.

Dazzling, longing grasps deep
tightly wrapped around our bones.
Engraved with Divinity's lightning tongue, "something more"
was written by our stars.

Nature's path
leads to sailing from this
pale world
to the tangible.

We are not compartmentalized
nor constrained to contentment
that only lasts a single breath.
Our stars are real when
we finally embrace them.

It will be a beautiful reunion indeed.

Friday, August 16, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: heaven,life,life and death,space,stars
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
A meteor's journey.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 11 September 2019

A wonderful write, Tranquil....10++++

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Mahtab Bangalee 28 August 2019

Our stars are real when we finally embrace them........////superb introspective writings on unity starting shall be the well introduction whern ending shall unite it roundly with all function! starting shall be the well introduction when the ending roundly unite all with total function!

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Chinedu Dike 22 August 2019

A poignant rendition insightfully crafted in persuasive poetic expressions with conviction. Thanks for sharing, Tranquil.

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