2012 Poem by Jan Freundschuh

2012

Rating: 5.0


If you live in the present,
You are a soul that has
Chosen the crest of the wave.
Hello, Fellow Crestor.

If you lived in the past, you
Were once on a crest.
The crest crested and subsided,
And you may still be
Oceanic,
O my ancestors,

Unless you remounted
This cresting wave;
In which case,

How tired are you? ........and...

What do you think will happen?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 14 March 2012

I really really like this, a fantastic poem.

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Michael Morgan 08 March 2012

Very now. Fresh ideas. Great voice. Great simplicity. Minimum adjectives. Great verbal oomph.

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