You Do Poem by Felix Emeka George

You Do



Today though beautiful to say
You always in my mind daily.
I missed your touching
Everyday and every night
Feeling to feel your warm embrace
Each day and each night
Seeing you is what am wanting you
To give my mind, say you do too
But sad, for the fact that
Your body language feels me too
Yours and I heart wants for
We are many miles apart
Our soul force straight from heart
Me too believe you as my fingers pen
You do........poem to my hearthrob val

By: Felix Emeka George
Copyright: 2017
'All Rights Reserved'

Tuesday, February 14, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Irshad Tantry 14 February 2017

A nice write, but you need to focus on the spacing of the lines of your poem.Just stacking a bunch of lines on top of each other peturbs the beauty of a poem and hence, the reader doesn't enjoy the poem because he/she gets lost in-between the words.Apart from that, which is not really a big deal, your poem is pretty nice and i really enjoyed it.Thanks for sharing...

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