Within. Poem by Rebecca Navarre

Within.

Rating: 5.0


Listen to the deeper sounds
of life. The echo's and the vibes,
the trembles of time. The motion
of the skies, the feel of the tides.
The soul within the eye, and the
heart inside.

Saturday, April 24, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: heart,life,nature,sound,feelings
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Captain Cur 24 April 2021

These lines are layered with mysticism! Beautiful ending line!

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kyvin nash 26 April 2021

Well said...it all start there or the source lies there within... Thank you for sharing Rebecca.

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Ricky Magnathen 26 April 2021

Yeah true..Bravo.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 April 2021

WITHIN, most fantastically rendered, my dearest Becca. From my heart to yours! Sent with love, Sylvia

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 April 2021

Indeed Listen to the deeper sounds of Life, it is WITHIN. I cite you here dearest Becca: The soul within the eye, and the heart inside.Absolutely The Heart Inside.5 Stars Full and to my Favourites!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 April 2021

Yes, we must listen to the melody of life... beautifully written...5 stars

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