Wishes Poem by Tanja Bulovic

Wishes

Rating: 4.7


She wished for a coat, you put your arms around her
She wished for a bracelet, you bound her
She wished for forever, you stayed on inside her
Just like you knew you would.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ace Of Black Hearts 24 June 2011

The simplicity of the wonderful is all I can say. Great Poem, keep them coming.

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 24 June 2011

Outstanding poem. Wonderfully conceived. Great imagery with nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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