! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Winter Woes- Haiku2! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Poem by Mamta Agarwal

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Rating: 5.0


Red hot swollen toes,
Too big for closed shoes, feel blue.
Squirm, limp out of door.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Indira Renganathan 13 November 2009

I Agree..swollen toes are winter woes...painful...short but meaningful....thank you

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premji premji 15 February 2010

none sees your swollen heart.........

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Allemagne Roßmann 07 February 2010

Squirm, limp out of door. did you do that ever! And what happened to your winter woe-r.Did he become your summer or became just a monsoon before you bid him a goodbye.......or if not may be the spring which once made you smile and himself lost in the hoopla of passion-4ever 4m life. Anyways-good write

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it is written as the sonnet.. the first two tell the problem that last solves it.. well kind off. thsi happen to me once. i was in a rush and assumed the shoe would fit a thinner sock.. didnt.. i thought i woudl die.. i like your poem.

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Siddharth Singh 24 November 2009

Take care of the limp, let warm water get your toes glimpse.

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Ranjit Ravindran 13 November 2009

Painful Poem. You'll get well soon ma'am.

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