As day follows night so begins a new dawn,
and starting anew there's a life that is born,
and lived for a while in the crook of your arm.
As day follows night you forsake all your dreams,
forget all your plans, all your hopes and your schemes.
For now there are others, to think of, it seems.
As day follows night children grow into men,
and caring for others starts over again,
the adult is child and you take on their pain
As day follows night you begin to feel old.
This wasn't the life you had thought would unfold,
things happened that spiraled your life uncontrolled
As day follows night soon the caring is gone.
The loves of your life have grown up or passed on.
You're just treading water a tired, old mute swan.
As day follows night each new sunset comes near.
You look at your past and you know that it's clear,
the smile on your face is a mask, a veneer
As day follows night you've no life left to share.
The ones that you loved most are no longer there,
as death just gets nearer, you no longer care.
a very sad reality poem as night follows day we all cannot stay? .............well written LP
You're never alone. We become young again in our poems. There's always someone older who needs a friend. This old rooster still got a good crow left. I can relate to this poem. I just wrote Acquitting Alice for those who can use a good laugh. Be blessed and write on.
Your comments did make me laugh Chris..’This old rooster still got a good crow left’! ! I am loving the imagery there..I am off to read Acquitting Alice..I love a good laugh my friend..it is as good as having a portrait of Dorian Gray in the attic! ..and poetry certainly is ‘The best of times’ for us!
As day follows night soon the caring is gone. The loves of your life have grown up or passed on. You're just treading water a tired, old mute swan...shattered hopes, reconciling oneself with the present situation and writing about it..... lovely poem dear poetess. tony
Thank you so much for your very kind words Tony, which are very much appreciated.. Lodigiana x
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A lovely poem dear Lodigiana. Life is a spiral movement, always oscillating through different positions, but the wavelengths change every time. 10++++++