When You Look At Me
When you look at me
you really are looking at me
not my big brown eyes, not my wavy brown hair
not my unblemished skin
your eyes just stare
deep into my eyes
my soul you see
warmth embellishes me
as your eyes look deeply
you capture me completely
when you look at me
I can see you too
who you are
through and through
it is true our meeting was fate
I say now, you were so worth the wait
copyright @ Aqua Flower
really like this and miss such looks. the eyes can offer up so much magic and beauty
A real look in someone reaches the deepest portion of someone's heart.
Thank you Akhtar for your comment. This was written for a very special person in my life.
A beautiful poem on love that holds us spellbound. A great remembrance and lovingly penned for a soulmate.10
Spellbound is a great description of being with one's soulmate. Thank you for this lovely comment.
A lovely poem indeed. The first meeting of lovers is so enchanting. 'who you are through and through it is true our meeting was fate I say now, you were so worth the wait'..is so nice. Enjoyed.
Funny how an old love can come back to your mind and heart...the walk down memory lane. Lovely piece and I can appreciate a heart remembering! PEACE.
Reminiscing about old love makes us feel young and alive! Thank you for your comment Susan!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This was an old poem written when I first met my soulmate. Re-posting this poem and reminiscing of the days when I wrote this. Aqua Flower