*** When We Fall Apart *** Poem by Sulaiman Mohd Yusof
*** When We Fall Apart ***
Krakatoa roars lava flows
Natives scattered to death
Grasses no longer need a mow
Leaving no lives and wealth
I’d float like a feather
Falls into your abyss of devotion,
Drowns in your pond of murmur
Plunging in slow motion
Like Krakatoa, you expel your lethal blow
Shattering me into million pieces
But I'd stand right to the core
Of your devil’s glimpses
Your snowy little heart
As cool as your talk
No matter how no matter what
I’d come to you and do the walk
Please don’t leave me
If I ever hurt you
Shall I beg for mercy?
As my love isn’t true
One day when you find me stranded
Heading to the road of insanity
Straying to nowhere and unwanted
That’s the day love has gone awry
My heart turns blue unlike the roses
Bright red as our once passion
Why the halts and pauses
No more intense and seduction
Our love poem is reminder
Catastrophe of human tragedy
My blood bleeds like water
A sign of your cruelty
Marriage no longer exists
Those were the dreams
Your sweet sticky kiss
As good as it seems
When I go down to the soil
I’d carry your heart with me
Treasure our romance and brawl
From then to eternity
So sad, the deeper you love the stronger the pain when you don't get love back. Your poem is beautifully written. Thumbs up! Keep up your good work! JYJY
This poem flows together beautifully. Something every poet strives for. An absolutely wonderful read!
eye have developed a stYle of eye eye write like eye am speaking to mye heart and you have written this one almost the same way keep it up sahib
Hi I could feel something from your poem.But I don't know definitely, something limitless, ineffable...
really good piece.... dreams dont always come true for everyone... but its what you can hold on to, its what you have, what you have gained that matters. 10+
it ends with tears...maybe, u wrote ths one when ur still depressed thats why, every lines of the poems are realstic..whew....mmmmm mmmmm mm m mmmmmm mm mmmmmmmm mmmmm mm..means THIS IS REALLY GREAT HON..
Wowwwww... I just remember the song, 'Ocean apart, day after day...' You describe it so clear, love it's always complicated, , , Ohohoho, don't give up, apart by ocean or land is not a measure (?) of our faith... The Great One! ! Naru Kaede, ,
I love titles that catch my eye and this was an eye catcher for sure for me :) loving it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/3/2024 11:21:42 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Awww, From the explosion of love to breaking a heart. Sad, but sweet. Excellent work!