Wheel Of Action Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Wheel Of Action

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Soul comes to play on this earth,
Entering in a body he takes birth.
It is wonder soul doesn't able to know,
He performs action, tries to drink snow.

He bows before land and before tree,
Falling in clumsy path tries to be free.
Running behind matter he works in day,
For each action sure attention does play.

Matter attracts soul he forgets right,
Instead of light he falls in night.
He forgets that he is shining star,
Leaving this value he goes far.

Falling in confusion soul again cries,
In ignorance with matter action he tries.
Now with matter soul does a bond,
Soul thinks to wash sin bathing in pond.

You awake soul awake time is ringing,
Know your form dove is singing.
Love comes in heart while you know father,
In wonder creation you adore him further.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,2 June 2015. All rights reserved.

Sunday, November 20, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 24 November 2016

I quote rom your very poem.... Falling in confusion soul again cries, In ignorance with matter action he tries. Now with matter soul does a bond, Soul thinks to wash sin bathing in pond.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 November 2016

picture of Drake Banner xIt's great, love the feeling it brings with the words. 2 Jun 2015 by Drake Banner | Reply picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xthis is a great piece. How excellent! ! 2 Jun 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xBeautiful ink tfs xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo blessings darling 2 Jun 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ x........an incredible write...and so imaginative :) ★ 2 Jun 2015 by sunprincess ♡ ♡ ♡ | Reply picture of Nishu Mathur xEnriching to read! Very beautiful. 2 Jun 2015 by Nishu Mathur | Reply picture of DEEP DARK SOUL xnice flowing piece filled with emotion 18 Jun 2015 by DEEP DARK SOUL | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xHe forgets he is a shining star....beautiful! ! ! ! 29 Jul 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 November 2016

Souls on earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Pushpendra Patel 27 February 2019

Wheel of action is related to soul's play. Leaf carries letter. Calmness is inside own mind. This we should feel. Soul is pure. Nature impacts on soul. This is a great poem and you are a nice poet.

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Kim Barney 21 November 2022

Congratulations on member poem of the day! Couldn't happen to a nicer guy!

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Bipin Churchung Rabha 21 November 2022

Great poem Sir!

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Sylvia Frances Chan 22 November 2022

Yes, Birpin this IS a great poem, thank you for coming here

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Dr Dillip K Swain 21 November 2022

Msny congratulations dear poet. You deserve the honour! !

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 November 2022

Now with matter soul does a bond, Soul thinks to wash sin bathing in pond. This is hilarious great humor. I just can't help to write down these words, according to my best friend Dr. Geeta, I say to you NAMASTE, by the way I know Dr. Geeta years ago in Amsterdam, I saw her dancing amazingly.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 21 November 2022

So very happy to see your poem WHEEL OF ACTION as The MEMBER POEM OF THE DAY. GOD's BLESSINGS IN ABUNDANCE, Best Regards, Sylvia Frances Chan

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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