What Is That….? Poem by Devanshu Patel

What Is That….?

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What is that….?

What is that we need to have
To live a life instead of dragging
Our existence in vain?
What is that which makes
Our work, a worship
Instead of a strain?
What is that which makes
A stone, a deity
Instead of mundane?
What is that which makes us
Respect a woman equal to mother or sister
And make us from lust refrain?
What is that which makes us feel
This world to be worth living
Without making any complaint?
What is that which teaches us
The value of co-existence
Stopping us from being insane?
What is that which makes us
Help the poor and needy
And feel their pain?
And
What is that which fills us with positivity
Erasing all kinds of negativity
From our brain?

© Devanshu Patel
11/29/2018

Friday, November 30, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: contemplation
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
These questions deals with the basics of our life. I hope you will like to help me in answering and finding solutions to live a good life. If you like this new experiment of mine please write your answers in your comment.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 03 December 2018

my dear poet DP your words so sincere touch all so deeply and you will love my poetry equally my Moms Smiles as you respect women kindly comment and cast ur vote 'twill be a summary of beauty coming from a poet like DP thnk q

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 December 2018

This poem is a masterpiece so nicely and astutely delineated on the base of morality through question tags. All question will get positive answers sure where one can find peace and happiness. I love most the lines are....What is that which makes us / Respect a woman equal to mother or sister / And make us from refrain? Thank you dear Patel for sharing this gem. Full vote.

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Dr Antony Theodore 01 December 2018

What is that which makes us Respect a woman equal to mother or sister And make us from refrain? a beautiful poem on contemplation..... there is only goodness in your poem and great advises.. thank u. tony

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Abhipsa Panda 01 December 2018

A nice write.....May be the answer is God's grace...

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Susan Williams 01 December 2018

Very introspective. I find wisdom and guidance in my Bible and my answered prayers.

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Devanshu Patel

Devanshu Patel

Kapadwanj, Gujarat (India)
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