We Are The Child (Rhyme) . Poem by Sk. Nurul Huda
We Are The Child (Rhyme) .
We are the Child
We are the human child
We are soft we are mild
We do not know to beguile
We sprinkle the lithe smile.
God is meek and God is mild
As we are all, the little child
Blake says this Blake says this
So hate us not buy come and kiss.
Now do hear us, please do hear
This is not a false song of fear
Come and hug to make a room for us
Should we not be loved by the mass?
Make a way make a land, for you and us
By which we all can run and all can rush
To the civilised colony to the civilized ground
Where peace is worthier than a heap of pound.
Hay Boss, we love to grow in green and white
We want not darkness, no we want not night
Oh the elders do not play do not do day and night
Only the bad games of war war andfight.
R-sk Nurul Huda for Songs of 47.
in last stanza...'white and green' stand for peace.
Where peace is worthier Than a heap of pound.................is pound referring to money? i might use where peace is worth more than .................................................................a heap of pounds might the reference to green and white have to do with the two flag colors in India, as mentioned below? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - (thanks Google) In the national flag of India the top band is of Saffron colour, indicating the strength and courage of the country. The white middle band indicates peace and truth with Dharma Chakra. The last band is green in colour shows the fertility, growth and auspiciousness of the land. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - as for your rhyming: ==================================== We are the child We are soft and mild We do not know to beguile We sprinkle sleek and lithe smile. [stanza one has rhyming the way i like to rhyme, with what i call perfect rhymes, which i've recently mentioned to you.] Come and hug us As you all know We are loved by mass. Make a way for us By which we can rush To the civilized ground Where peace is worthier Than a heap of pound. [us/rush is close to perfect; ground/pound is 'perfect'] Do not fill the rooms with bombs only Rather church and mosque or places holy [only/holy is close] [i could interpret those lines in two ways: 1. do not fill just the rooms with bombs. also fill the church and mosque or places holy with bombs. BUT i doubt you mean THAT! ! 2. do NOT fill the rooms with bombs only......[ Bri says why have ANY bombs? ? maybe the rooms signifies India, which may 'need' some bombs for 'defense'? ? ].... fill also with church and mosque or places holy We love to grow in green and white We want not darkness and only night Oh the elders do not play day and night The bad games of war and fight. [white/night/night/fight........................perfect rhymes, but i usually would not have the same word ending consecutive lines. but there is no 'good reason' not to do that.] bri :)
Bri my friend...thanks first of all.....what an evaluation this rhyme has bagged! ! ! you are right for /.... Do not fill the rooms with bombs only Rather church and mosque or places holy [only/holy is close] [i could interpret those lines in two ways: 1. do not fill just the rooms with bombs. also fill the church and mosque or places holy with bombs. BUT i doubt you mean THAT! ! 2. do NOT fill the rooms with bombs only......[ Bri says why have ANY bombs? ? maybe the rooms signifies India, which may 'need' some bombs for 'defense'? ? ].... fill also with church and mosque or places holy ..i change it.... green and white...represent...peace...symbolically. thanks again for guiding to rhyme.
A beautiful and meaningful poem shared. Let me quote the lines.... We love to grow in green and white We want not darkness and only night. Thanks.....10
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4/27/2024 11:29:54 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Children's innocent pleas are left unheard... How I wish they leave the future generation safe and secure without harming them. Nice poem Nurul.10
thanks a lot..... yes what we can not say to hide something....a child do.... have supper time.