Waiting..... Poem by Devanshu Patel

Waiting.....

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Waiting...

I was thinking while i was waiting
everybody, like me, must be hating
It is tedious,
it is hideous,
Waiting can never be so elating!

© Devanshu Patel
1/8/2019

Tuesday, January 8, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: reflections
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 08 January 2019

t is tedious, it is hideous, Waiting can never be so elating! .reflections that brings to us readers your feelings and emotions........ tony

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Valsa George 03 October 2019

A beautiful limerick! It states a truth! If we are waiting for something or somebody, the longer the wait, the greater becomes the annoyance in us....!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 12 August 2019

This poem resonates with me. Waiting is tedious. It eats our time. If two persons agreed upon with the time to meet, it must be followed strictly so as not to waste time. A wonderful reflection...A fascinating limerick

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Aniruddha Pathak 09 August 2019

Yes, no one likes to wait, for, it is viewed as waste of time. But then that is what we do all life. We wait to grow up to do this and that, and joys of childhood slip from our hands; we wait to earn more to buy this and that and forget to enjoy youth; let me retire and I will tour this place and that, and by that time our limbs are not strong enough to go to all those places we once wanted to.... This simple limerick brings in to bear all these thoughts.

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Abhipsa Panda 08 January 2019

Really true sir....beautifully crafted

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Abhipsa Panda 08 January 2019

Really true air...beautifully crafted....thanks for sharing

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Devanshu Patel

Devanshu Patel

Kapadwanj, Gujarat (India)
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