Vodka Poem by Rini Shibu

Vodka

Rating: 4.9


Concisous mind keeps away
Unconscious mind keeps nearer
The feeling which I get
Be with me now and then
Your Love is chilling
Like an ice cube in the vodka
So pure and crystal clear
Crazy to sip again
Slowly in every sip
Like the touch of your lips
Your love is intoxicating
Spreading all over me
To dissolve you in me

Wednesday, July 5, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 06 July 2017

A good recognition mind and love. Thanks

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Rini Shibu 07 July 2017

Thank you so much Jazib.. Rini

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Robert Murray Smith 05 July 2018

Reread. It brings to mind Russian drinking songs.

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Robert Murray Smith 09 May 2018

A poem that the Russians would drink to. Me too.+++10

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Stephani Kievaughan 23 September 2017

phew hot! this one is hot to the touch

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Rini Shibu 25 September 2017

Thanks..don't touch..lol

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Edward Kofi Louis 09 September 2017

The feeling which i get! ! Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 11 September 2017

Thanks Edward for reading this poem Rini

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Saadat Tahir 11 July 2017

an interesting write... sensuous, intimate with nice similes.... i liked the way the poem progressed kool!

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Rini Shibu 12 July 2017

Thank you.....

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