Concisous mind keeps away
Unconscious mind keeps nearer
The feeling which I get
Be with me now and then
Your Love is chilling
Like an ice cube in the vodka
So pure and crystal clear
Crazy to sip again
Slowly in every sip
Like the touch of your lips
Your love is intoxicating
Spreading all over me
To dissolve you in me
an interesting write... sensuous, intimate with nice similes.... i liked the way the poem progressed kool!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A good recognition mind and love. Thanks
Thank you so much Jazib.. Rini