Until The Seas Run Dry Poem by Benjamin Chiu Uy

Until The Seas Run Dry

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Until the Seas run dry

Until such time when erosion comdems,
Return our bodies to the brown earth,

Man is alive,
Thinking,
Planing,
Planting his soul on the planet,
Staking a place of his stay.

Until the great dreams are made,
He is contiuing to dream,

A great sky paradise,
A park of green trees,

A summer wind,
The lips of wine with a song.
The ocean on a liner or a ship,

The beauty, pisturesqe unsurpassed,
He will continue his pilgrimage.

If, Science unsolved,
The quest continues,

Until the dark is not light any more but fire and
the air is unbreathable,

Until you shall be the last girl, i would see in this planet,

Until God forsakes his beloved,

My, our will is unbreakable.

Monday, July 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: survival
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 09 July 2018

Until the great dreams are made, He is contiuing to dream, A great sky paradise, A park of green trees, .. thank u for this fine poem full of noble thoughts filled with great imagination.. tony

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Robert Murray Smith 02 July 2018

A few corrections are needed. Probably not your best effort.

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 July 2018

cap-a-pie of this poem is really excellent wonderful description like to quote some lines- Until the dark is not light any more but fire and the air is unbreathable, Until you shall be the last girl, i would see in this planet, Until God forsakes his beloved, My, our will is unbreakable.

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