Unfamiliar Poem by Lotlot Diaz

Unfamiliar

Rating: 4.0


With this unfamiliar dream
I have been awake by something,
Outdoor...
I saw this unfamiliar scene.
Smokes are everywhere
And fogs are kissed to the ground.
Walking down the stairs
I notice this endless steps
And it annoise me.
Then I choose no stairs
And droping myself instead
But only to fall oh so deep...
As I feel the air
It feels like flying.
As I touch the clouds
It feels like floating.
And as I finally reach the ground
It feels like landing,
And I do really feel no harm
But fun.
With this unfamiliar place
I saw no one has face,
Just small and wallded houses,
Wallded with white paint.
fear begun to arise
Now i feel oh so scared.

With this unfamiliar thing
I hear singing voices,
And in my mind
Flashes of an angels faces.
Then a smile is I finally made,
Now I feel oh so safe...
But then it suddenly changed,
Its noisy and sanged angrily
As I get closely and near.

From those unfamiliar voices,
I run as fast as I can,
But then again
Only to fall oh so deep...

With this familiar morning
I have been truelly awaken
By my unfamiliar dream.
and a real smile is i finally made,
for everything was just all a dream,
just an unfamilliar dream.

Wednesday, June 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: dreams
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
It is one of my childhood dream
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 22 June 2016

Walking down the stairs I notice this endless steps And it annoise me. Then I choose no stairs And droping myself instead But only to fall oh so deep... As I feel the air It feels like flying. As I touch the clouds It feels like floating. I love the mystreries involved in this dream. Thanks poet for the lovely poem.10 marks for it. Subhas

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