Two Lovers In The Rains Poem by Akhtar Jawad

Two Lovers In The Rains

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Two lovers in the rains,
counting old stains!

The pressure of taboos
obstacles of customs
still danced on
their hearts' fulcrums
forgetting the strains.
Two lovers in the rains,
Counting old stains!

Were they blind,
or in love insane,
for a kiss so mad!
A teenage inane!
It removed their pains.
Two lovers in the rains,
Counting old stains!

And the old couple,
with a naughty smile
once again recollected
the age so mobile
in mountains and plains.
Two lovers in the rains,
Counting old stains!

Friday, May 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: rains
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khalida Bano Ali 12 October 2018

Enjoyed this romantic poem, well penned write.

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M Asim Nehal 14 May 2016

Nice poem indeed, love knows no bounds and it unleashes in rains.

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Loke Kok Yee 14 May 2016

Surely true love had been attained. Thank you sir-10

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Kelly Kurt 13 May 2016

This is why you are indeed a poet, Akhtar. Love, meaning, innuendo and beauty, all wrapped up neatly in a package that only you could put a bow on.

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