Two Eye Whirligig Poem by Bill Grace

Two Eye Whirligig

Rating: 3.5


The neighbor's lawn's whirligig's
caught the lamplight's reflection
and I thought I saw for a half minute past hallucination
the gleam of two eyes
caught in the strangeness
of a street's light
and anxiety
over a lost cat
that made me hyper vigilant.

Friday, March 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: cat,illusion,reflection
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Incident walking the dog on a street at night.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
L Milton Hankins 15 September 2020

May i suggest that you edit this a bit to make whirligigs plural and not possessive? You are a good poet, a fine thinker, and a needed contributor to PoemHunter, so be sure your work is presented in its best light...with no silly errors!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 02 March 2018

The lamplight's reflection is caught in amazing place with thought of expression. Brilliant view is shared with this poem...10

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Bill Grace 07 March 2018

Thank you Kumarmani. WAG

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