Together For Life Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

Together For Life

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We are a perfect pair of shoes
that shows the time's effects or use.
Our knot does not make itself loose
as we are laced so glorious.

Together For Life
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
This form is called Dalit, a traditional short Filipino poem which is only a quatrain, having 8 syllables in each line. The rhyming scheme is aaaa.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carl Roussell 04 October 2022

I like the poem and thnk you for introducing me to a new form!

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Bernard F. Asuncion

Bernard F. Asuncion

Subic, Philippines
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