Together At Once Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Together At Once

Rating: 5.0


Love in this world
Feel nicely in fold
But with limitations
As we are bound by human relations

After all what for we are here?
Why at all we should fear?
From fellow brethren
With lots of concerns

It is marred
We are debarred
Some times on cast with no basic
Sometimes religion is basis

We have witnessed racial abuses
With basic rights and freedom refusals
Color and creed has ruled the roots
Peace marchers are ordered to shoot

World is living under volcano
It has to be ceased as inferno
Love must find place at heart
Let us begin with good start

We are sure to sail through
Religion is at core and that is true
We have nothing to do with anybody’s faith
As that shall remain till death

Let us burn hatred together
Break all the known barriers
Let us give peace a honest chance
We should feel together at once

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 01 August 2013

Re: Together at once (Score: 1) by Amoola on Wednesday, July 31,2013 (15: 13: 18) I like this poem a lot.. The message it has is relevant to the stuff going on in the world right now. Everyone sure have their religion but why not all of us as humans unite and be together? Good work.. Smile

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really deep Jessica Binnebose5 minutes ago Very interesting flow and the words are so true. Great job Comment +1 ERH

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Kwayvon Midget5 minutes ago devg

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Love in this world Feel nicely in fold

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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