These Days 5 Poem by DM W

These Days 5

Rating: 5.0


These days, I contemplate the cracks in Creation.
O Time is certainly not on our side it seems!
I listen closely to radical persuasions.
For I don't want to give up on my hopes and dreams.

Thursday, September 17, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: modern
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 18 September 2020

Dominic a most neatly written and so smoothly presented quatrain. And I would never have dreamed up your superb phrase ' I contemplate the cracks in Creation.' Superb! Five stars and yes, never give up on hopes or dreams. Ever. Thanks for sharing and I wish you well.

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